This is the marked first draft from my social media project. For this marking up of the draft, I used three different color highlighters. One color (yellow) was used to highlight the “I Say” parts of my essay while the other two colors (Blue and Pink) were used to highlight the two different sources that I used. This was extremely helpful as it allowed me to see which areas I needed to include more of, and where I may need to include another source or quote. This gave me a good starting place for revising going into the final draft.
